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The line of shading is still leaking away from the lineart of the rump a lot. [[User:Jayfrost (BC)|<span style="color:#6699FF;font-family:Comic Sans MS;">Jayie</span>]] ^{[[User talk:Jayfrost (BC)|<span style="color:#00CFFf;font-family:Times New Roman;">Unwritten </span>]][[User:Jayfrost (BC)/Chararts|<span style="color:#00CFFf;font-family:Times New Roman;">words~</span>]]} 21:36, September 20, 2016 (UTC)

The line of shading is still leaking away from the lineart of the rump a lot. [[User:Jayfrost (BC)|<span style="color:#6699FF;font-family:Comic Sans MS;">Jayie</span>]] ^{[[User talk:Jayfrost (BC)|<span style="color:#00CFFf;font-family:Times New Roman;">Unwritten </span>]][[User:Jayfrost (BC)/Chararts|<span style="color:#00CFFf;font-family:Times New Roman;">words~</span>]]} 21:36, September 20, 2016 (UTC)

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==[[Juniperclaw]] (Ro) - Withdrawn==

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[[File:Juniperclaw.rogue.png]] man its been forever — [[User:Minkclaw/Chararts|<font face="Vivaldi" size="1" color="#08088A>Minkclaw</font>]]^{[[User talk:Minkclaw|<span style="font-family=Vivaldi; color:#3A01DF7; text-shadow:2px 2px 4px #000000;">River is Beauty, Beauty is Everything.</span>]]} 16:04, September 9, 2016 (UTC)

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Define the shading a tad. [[User:Patchfeather14|<span style="font-family:Segoe Script;font-size:15px;text-shadow:lime 1px 1px 2px;"><span style="color:#00cf00;">~P</span></span><span style="font-family:Segoe Script;font-size:15px;text-shadow:lime 1px 1px 2px;"><span style="color:#00cf8e;">a</span></span><span style="font-family:Segoe Script;font-size:15px;text-shadow:lime 1px 1px 2px;"><span style="color:#00cfbb;">t</span></span><span style="font-family:Segoe Script;font-size:15px;text-shadow:lime 1px 1px 2px;"><span style="color:#00cfff;">c</span></span><span style="font-family:Segoe Script;font-size:15px;text-shadow:lime 1px 1px 2px;"><span style="color:#00aaff;">h</span></span>]][[User talk:Patchfeather14|<span style="font-family:Segoe Script;font-size:15px;text-shadow:lime 1px 1px 2px;"><span style="color:#006fff;">f</span></span><span style="font-family:Segoe Script;font-size:15px;text-shadow:lime 1px 1px 2px;"><span style="color:#0039ff;">e</span></span><span style="font-family:Segoe Script;font-size:15px;text-shadow:lime 1px 1px 2px;"><span style="color:#6c39ff;">a</span></span><span style="font-family:Segoe Script;font-size:15px;text-shadow:lime 1px 1px 2px;"><span style="color:#9639e8;">t</span></span><span style="font-family:Segoe Script;font-size:15px;text-shadow:lime 1px 1px 2px;"><span style="color:#a739ff;">h</span></span><span style="font-family:Segoe Script;font-size:15px;text-shadow:lime 1px 1px 2px;"><span style="color:#da39ff;">e</span></span><span style="font-family:Segoe Script;font-size:15px;text-shadow:lime 1px 1px 2px;"><span style="color:#ff39e8;">r~</span></span>]] 20:34, September 9, 2016 (UTC)

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The shading I used is pure black. Its the darkest, at 100% and blurred and all. Could I get some more comments on that? — [[User:Minkclaw/Chararts|<font face="Vivaldi" size="1" color="#08088A>Minkclaw</font>]]^{[[User talk:Minkclaw|<span style="font-family=Vivaldi; color:#3A01DF7; text-shadow:2px 2px 4px #000000;">River is Beauty, Beauty is Everything.</span>]]} 04:02, September 10, 2016 (UTC)

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define doesn't mean darken, it means make more visible. Which reminds me, I can't see a source with this and the shading kinda seems all over the place. Did you use a different image as a reference? {{User:SnowedLightning/Sig2|06:44, 9/10/2016}}

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No, the light source comes from the left. It's similar to the rogue images I looked at for examples which was Tigerstar and someone else, can't remember them rn. — [[User:Minkclaw/Chararts|<font face="Vivaldi" size="1" color="#08088A>Minkclaw</font>]]^{[[User talk:Minkclaw|<span style="font-family=Vivaldi; color:#3A01DF7; text-shadow:2px 2px 4px #000000;">River is Beauty, Beauty is Everything.</span>]]} 01:56, September 11, 2016 (UTC)

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I think maybe reduce the chest shading some and it's fine. {{User:.Trollsky/Sig}} 03:13, September 11, 2016 (UTC)

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I think it might be my computer, but on the shoulder, it looks like the shading is a square? Like right by the chest. {{User:Snowdapple/Sig}} <small><span style="{{User:Snowdapple/Time}}">16:32, 9/11/2016</span></small>

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No, I see it. I'll fix that. I'll most likely have it up Monday or Tuesday. I'm mobile rn. — [[User:Minkclaw/Chararts|<font face="Vivaldi" size="1" color="#08088A>Minkclaw</font>]]^{[[User talk:Minkclaw|<span style="font-family=Vivaldi; color:#3A01DF7; text-shadow:2px 2px 4px #000000;">River is Beauty, Beauty is Everything.</span>]]} 16:47, September 11, 2016 (UTC)

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'''Re-Ups''', removed the square and some of the chest shading. — [[User:Minkclaw/Chararts|<font face="Vivaldi" size="1" color="#08088A>Minkclaw</font>]]^{[[User talk:Minkclaw|<span style="font-family=Vivaldi; color:#3A01DF7; text-shadow:2px 2px 4px #000000;">River is Beauty, Beauty is Everything.</span>]]} 14:18, September 12, 2016 (UTC)

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Maybe blur the shading by the front leg? It looks like it's a bit bold next to the rest of the shading, might just be me. [[User:Patchfeather14|<span style="font-family:Segoe Script;font-size:15px;text-shadow:lime 1px 1px 2px;"><span style="color:#00cf00;">~P</span></span><span style="font-family:Segoe Script;font-size:15px;text-shadow:lime 1px 1px 2px;"><span style="color:#00cf8e;">a</span></span><span style="font-family:Segoe Script;font-size:15px;text-shadow:lime 1px 1px 2px;"><span style="color:#00cfbb;">t</span></span><span style="font-family:Segoe Script;font-size:15px;text-shadow:lime 1px 1px 2px;"><span style="color:#00cfff;">c</span></span><span style="font-family:Segoe Script;font-size:15px;text-shadow:lime 1px 1px 2px;"><span style="color:#00aaff;">h</span></span>]][[User talk:Patchfeather14|<span style="font-family:Segoe Script;font-size:15px;text-shadow:lime 1px 1px 2px;"><span style="color:#006fff;">f</span></span><span style="font-family:Segoe Script;font-size:15px;text-shadow:lime 1px 1px 2px;"><span style="color:#0039ff;">e</span></span><span style="font-family:Segoe Script;font-size:15px;text-shadow:lime 1px 1px 2px;"><span style="color:#6c39ff;">a</span></span><span style="font-family:Segoe Script;font-size:15px;text-shadow:lime 1px 1px 2px;"><span style="color:#9639e8;">t</span></span><span style="font-family:Segoe Script;font-size:15px;text-shadow:lime 1px 1px 2px;"><span style="color:#a739ff;">h</span></span><span style="font-family:Segoe Script;font-size:15px;text-shadow:lime 1px 1px 2px;"><span style="color:#da39ff;">e</span></span><span style="font-family:Segoe Script;font-size:15px;text-shadow:lime 1px 1px 2px;"><span style="color:#ff39e8;">r~</span></span>]] 15:19, September 12, 2016 (UTC)

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'''Re-Upps''' — [[User:Minkclaw/Chararts|<font face="Vivaldi" size="1" color="#08088A>Minkclaw</font>]]^{[[User talk:Minkclaw|<span style="font-family=Vivaldi; color:#3A01DF7; text-shadow:2px 2px 4px #000000;">River is Beauty, Beauty is Everything.</span>]]} 15:55, September 12, 2016 (UTC)

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Comments? — [[User:Minkclaw/Chararts|<font face="Vivaldi" size="1" color="#08088A>Minkclaw</font>]]^{[[User talk:Minkclaw|<span style="font-family=Vivaldi; color:#3A01DF7; text-shadow:2px 2px 4px #000000;">River is Beauty, Beauty is Everything.</span>]]} 11:57, September 15, 2016 (UTC)

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Tiny speck of waste above the back. {{User:Snowdapple/Sig}} <small><span style="{{User:Snowdapple/Time}}">21:55, 9/15/2016</span></small>

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'''Re-Upps''', removed the tiny speck of waste — [[User:Minkclaw/Chararts|<font face="Vivaldi" size="1" color="#08088A>Minkclaw</font>]]^{[[User talk:Minkclaw|<span style="font-family=Vivaldi; color:#3A01DF7; text-shadow:2px 2px 4px #000000;">River is Beauty, Beauty is Everything.</span>]]} 14:12, September 16, 2016 (UTC)

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Comments before approval? {{User:Appledash/Sig}} 18:18, September 17, 2016 (UTC)

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I still can't see a source with this. =/ It doesn't look like any one I've seen, and his facial shading makes it look like he's got a darker chin. Smooth out the shading a lot more too; it ends a bit abruptly in some places, such as the legs, haunch, and stomach areas. Also define the lighter area on the tail. {{User:SnowedLightning/Sig2|00:29, 9/18/2016}}

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Define the shading depth and light on the legs, as well. {{User:Snowdapple/Sig}} <small><span style="{{User:Snowdapple/Time}}">01:15, 9/18/2016</span></small>

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The shading looks like it's leaking away from the lineart on the lower part of the back. [[User:Jayfrost (BC)|<span style="color:#6699FF;font-family:Comic Sans MS;">Jayie</span>]] ^{[[User talk:Jayfrost (BC)|<span style="color:#00CFFf;font-family:Times New Roman;">Unwritten </span>]][[User:Jayfrost (BC)/Chararts|<span style="color:#00CFFf;font-family:Times New Roman;">words~</span>]]} 18:56, September 19, 2016 (UTC)

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I'll probably redo the shading and stuff..bc it looks like crap now that I deeply look at it. — [[User:Minkclaw/Chararts|<font face="Vivaldi" size="1" color="#08088A>Minkclaw</font>]]^{[[User talk:Minkclaw|<span style="font-family=Vivaldi; color:#3A01DF7; text-shadow:2px 2px 4px #000000;">River is Beauty, Beauty is Everything.</span>]]} 19:53, September 19, 2016 (UTC)

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Withdrawn — [[User:Minkclaw/Chararts|<font face="Vivaldi" size="1" color="#08088A>Minkclaw</font>]]^{[[User talk:Minkclaw|<span style="font-family=Vivaldi; color:#3A01DF7; text-shadow:2px 2px 4px #000000;">River is Beauty, Beauty is Everything.</span>]]} 23:57, September 20, 2016 (UTC)

==[[Roach]] (Ro) ~ For Approval==

==[[Roach]] (Ro) ~ For Approval==