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Kirstiegirl A Demon's Kiss
May 20 2008, 7:45 PM EDT | Post edited: May 20 2008, 7:45 PM EDT
This fic is a Sam/Ruby Paring From "No Rest For The Wicked" . I had this on a Web site under my name FallenAngel17 . THIS HAS SPOILERS
Sam Was Up against the wall "Where's Ruby?" he hissed
"She was a very bad girl so I sent her far away" Lilith Said laughing "This body's really Pretty" she said regaurding Ruby's body "and you wanna know somethin Sam? She thinks Your pretty to. Funny isn't It ? A Demon Falling head over Heels for a Human." She Said as a smile came to Her face."I think its nasty as Hell" Dean yelled "and how do you know what Ruby feels." "Because I know everything" Lilith said."Pretty Full of youself aren't ya? I said Ruby was ugly, Well you one has her Beat" Dean Said"Did I say you could talk?" Lilith said angerly to Dean. Lilith walked over to Sam "Ruby desires you In fact I think she loves you. She Pulled this silly stuff before falling for a mortal. I thought she learned her lesson but I guess not." Lilith got closer to Sam and pulled him into a kiss"Your lips are so soft" Lilith said "now I Know why she likes you"She walked over to the door "sick 'em boy" She laughed as she Let the Hellhound in."DEAN" Sam yelled as he watched his brother get torn apart. Lilith laugh a bright light filled the room as she tried to kill Sam. The light vanished and Sam was still there. He got up rage builing inside of him. He walked over to lilith with Ruby's knife . A loud yell Lilith left Rubys body. She fell over next to .Sam ran over to dean "I'm so sorry" he sobbed over and over.The women that owned the house came up along with her husband and daughter.He leaned down next to rubys body. "excuse me?" Sam looked over. She still has a pluse."Sam?" Ruby opened her eyes "I'm Sorry."Ruby passed out again" Review Quote & reply Post reply out of found this valuable. Do you find this valuable?
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DontCallMeSammy
1. RE: A Demon's Kiss
May 20 2008, 7:59 PM EDT | Post edited: May 20 2008, 7:59 PM EDT
interesting.... i'll read any fan fic with sam and dean plastered on it.. but i like how you encorperated the epesode with ur own creative thinking.. but wouldent teh family who owned the house be freaked because theres a guy riped to shreads in there dining room study thing?? and i dont think teh husband would say excuse me.. hmmm what else... wouldent the owners of the house want to know whats going on with everything and who sam was and also wouldent any normal person with sense in there heads not let a little girl look at a dead guy ... and wouldent they call adn ambulance or something?? dont mean to bring u down or anything just some things.. ya know like tips>> ~-,
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Kirstiegirl
2. RE: A Demon's Kiss
May 21 2008, 3:00 PM EDT | Post edited: May 21 2008, 3:00 PM EDT
Yeah but thanks for the tips. theres more to it but I could only put 2000 words in. I'm not sure if I should keep going or not
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DeansGirl666
3. RE: A Demon's Kiss
May 21 2008, 3:07 PM EDT | Post edited: May 21 2008, 3:07 PM EDT
thats good! you can make a page for yourself and continue it if you want!
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Kirstiegirl
4. RE: A Demon's Kiss
May 21 2008, 3:10 PM EDT | Post edited: May 21 2008, 3:10 PM EDT
okay how do I do that
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Kirstiegirl
5. RE: A Demon's Kiss
May 21 2008, 3:15 PM EDT | Post edited: May 21 2008, 3:15 PM EDT
Yeah I want to comtinue but how do I make a page?
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DeansGirl666
6. RE: A Demon's Kiss
May 21 2008, 3:16 PM EDT | Post edited: May 21 2008, 3:16 PM EDT
make sure your on the "fanfiction" page first. then on the left right above the "top contributors" section it says "add page" click that, add a title for the page (example: kirstiegirl fanfic), add some keyword tags if you want and then click "add page"
now that your page is done you can click "easy edit" and start typing your fanfic! let me know if you need help... i can add the page for you if you get really lost
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DontCallMeSammy
7. RE: A Demon's Kiss
May 21 2008, 3:45 PM EDT | Post edited: May 21 2008, 3:45 PM EDT
i would like to see what you come up with so keep goin!!
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Kirstiegirl
8. RE: A Demon's Kiss
May 21 2008, 4:20 PM EDT | Post edited: May 21 2008, 4:20 PM EDT
Thanks!
The man took Ruby upstairs. Sam heard a sob comeing from behind the woman. "You should send you kid upstairs. I think she has been though enough." The women noded and sent her upstairs. She walked towards Sam and put her hand on his shoulder. "I'm so sorry" she said quitely. Sam boke down again. "SAMMY" Bobby yelled as he came in. he took site at Deans body "Jesus." he breathed. " Sam we have to bury him." Bobby said
"no" Sam sobed "Sam we can't just leave a dead body here"
"I know" Sam yellled "Get some sleep I'll take care of things here" bobby said as his eyes teared up. Sam shook his head and walked upstairs. He felt like he was in a dream he pinched his arm. Nothing.He walked past the room Ruby was in.He looked over at Ruby her chest was riseing and falling. "At least the one person who could save Dean was still alive" He thought. Liliths words was still in his head. About how Ruby cared about him. He slumed in a chair next to the bed and fell asleep. Sam woke up the next morning he walked down stairs and explained everything to the family. Menwhile upstairs the little girl sat on the bed and watched Ruby. Ruby woke up and nearly jumped out of bed. "Lilith" she breathed "what are you talking about the girl answered"
"wheres Sam" Ruby yelled.After hearing all the yelling Sam ran upstairs to find out what was happening "Ruby thats not her" Sam yelled. Ruby looked over at Sam and ran over to him and pulled him into a hug. "Sam theres a way to bring Dean back. We just have to go back to your home town." Ruby wispered. Sam noded and told the family to call them if anything gose wrong. They passed by the room were Dean died. In the Impala Sam told Ruby that they have to make a pit stop to see Bobby. " He knows where deans body is" So thats ch2 tell me what you think
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samrulez01
9. RE: A Demon's Kiss
May 21 2008, 7:06 PM EDT | Post edited: May 21 2008, 7:06 PM EDT
add more!!! i am hooked!!! love it, i must kno where you thaught of this!! write a new episode, you need to write one so we can learn whart happens!!!!
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sackles89
10. RE: A Demon's Kiss
May 21 2008, 8:51 PM EDT | Post edited: May 21 2008, 8:51 PM EDT
you are so talented i love the storyso far i cnt w8 to read more keep it up. also let us kno wen u have the page done. : )
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bluebird123
11. RE: A Demon's Kiss
May 22 2008, 12:00 PM EDT | Post edited: May 22 2008, 12:00 PM EDT
hey join in this month's contest. you have great chance of winning the prize
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DontCallMeSammy
12. RE: A Demon's Kiss
May 22 2008, 3:06 PM EDT | Post edited: May 22 2008, 3:06 PM EDT
OOOHHHH gooddd very good!!
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Kirstiegirl
13. RE: A Demon's Kiss
May 22 2008, 4:02 PM EDT | Post edited: May 22 2008, 4:02 PM EDT
Thanks yeah I'll join the contest.
It was silent on the way to Bobby's. "Ruby your being extremely quite is there something wrong?"
Ruby gave him a look "No.....What did Lilith say to you when she was in my body?" Ruby asked "Nothing really" Sam lied. "I saw somethings that she did. God I should have knowen that she would try to pull something" Ruby said "I'm so stupid"
"Ruby your not Stupid I mean you got out of the trap that Dean put you in. I should have never let you go alone. She knows my weakness." ruby look up her face was tear stained. "weakness?" she asked softly. "yeah" Sam said "people who I care about" Ruby smiled, a smile that Sam was not used to. "So the great Sam has a soft spot for a demon" She said asmused "You have one for me Ruby" Sam said to her "don't you" Sam said "Sam really what did lilith tell you" Ruby said anoyed "Ruby she just said somethings but there not important." Sam said
"Then why the hell did she kiss you" she said. Sam gulped "you saw that?"
"Yes I did. I was still in my body. My memory is a little foggy" Ruby said
" We'll talk about it later" Sam said lets just get a room at the motel and get some sleep."
"fine" Ruby said rolling her eyes. "but Sam don't keep you feeling bottled up I'm here if you want to talk"
"what are you Dr. Phil all of a sudden." Sam asked
"No" Ruby said "I just care about you" Theres ch3 tell me what you think
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sackles89
14. RE: A Demon's Kiss
May 22 2008, 4:28 PM EDT | Post edited: May 22 2008, 4:28 PM EDT
that is wicked i swear u r so good. i loved it i had to tell ppl on msn to leave me alone for a few mins lol.
i love the whole dramatic irony, does sam kno or not? does he have the same feelings for ruby?
good stuff keep it coming
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DontCallMeSammy
15. RE: A Demon's Kiss
May 23 2008, 3:19 PM EDT | Post edited: May 23 2008, 3:19 PM EDT
AWESOME its gettin better everytime
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jackles 16. RE: A Demon's Kiss
May 23 2008, 3:24 PM EDT | Post edited: May 23 2008, 3:24 PM EDT
wow this is awesome! u write a good story
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Kirstiegirl 17. RE: A Demon's Kiss
May 23 2008, 4:00 PM EDT | Post edited: May 23 2008, 4:00 PM EDT
Sam and Ruby went into the motel room. "oh great." she said "qnother crap shoot." Sam looked anround the room "yeah pretty crappy." He said. " I bet if we brought a black light in here we could fined a sorts of nasty things."
"Thats great Ruby" Sam said ignoreing her comment. Ruby rolled her eyes. She hated being ingnored. "Hey Sam I'm pregant and you the father" Ruby said "Thats nice" Sam answered. Now Ruby new she was begining Ignored. "Sam!" she finally yelled "What" he wined "Why are you ignoreing me" she asked "I don't know Ruby mabye because I just lost my Brother or mabye it's because I have know one left in this world who actully gives a damn about me." Sam yelled " Sam" Ruby said her voice soft and un ruby like. " Bobby cares about you and I do to. Sam I wish I could be like you"
"what do you mean?" Sam asked
"Your so strong. I mean you lost so many people in your life and you still manage to get through it all." Ruby said as she put her hand on his shoulder.
Sam smiled "you actully acting like a human." I'm more Human then you think Sammy" She said Slyly. There was a short silence "So what is this about my powers being dormant" He asked "In time Sam in time. First lets get some sleep and get to bobbys." She answered. So yeah I know this is going a little slow but thanks for reviews. Tell me what you think
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May 23 2008, 5:59 PM EDT | Post edited: May 23 2008, 5:59 PM EDT
hey ur not that bad at rewriting the story but one thing is really off a bit ruby is sort f i dont know arrogant or pompous she isnt or yet at least head overheels kind to sam yet anyways she still feisty but ur stor isnt bad i like it good work i am writing a book my own work its fiction im having trouble at the moment with writing the romance scene at the time being but hey i enjoyed ur views i wouldnt mind reading further into it
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sackles89 19. RE: A Demon's Kiss
May 24 2008, 8:51 AM EDT | Post edited: May 24 2008, 8:51 AM EDT
it just gets better.
eventho i see where shadowsmist is coming from i still think it works and i thoroughly enjoy every section i read.
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Kirstiegirl 20. RE: A Demon's Kiss
May 24 2008, 10:52 PM EDT | Post edited: May 24 2008, 10:52 PM EDT
Yeah I knida wanted to bring in a little human side of ruby. But don't worry I'll still have The Same Ruby and a little bit of Dean will show up. I'll update on Monday
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achu19 21. RE: A Demon's Kiss
May 25 2008, 4:21 AM EDT | Post edited: May 25 2008, 4:21 AM EDT
thats a great ass spoiler
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Kirstiegirl 22. RE: A Demon's Kiss
May 26 2008, 2:45 PM EDT | Post edited: May 26 2008, 2:45 PM EDT
Sam woke up the next morning to find that Ruby was not in her bed. "Ruby?" Sam looked around . Ruby came out of the Bathroom with her hair pulled up "It's Hot as hell out there. And Trust me I know how hot it is down there" She saw the look on Sams face when she said that "Oh sorry Sam but don't worry theres a way to save him oh and by the way I'd take a shower if I where you cause you smell like crap" Sam gave Ruby a dirty look and then smelled his shirt "You right" He said grogly and steped into the bathroom. Ten minutes later Sam came out of the bathroom and saw Ruby wacthing Blues Clues "No wonder kids are messed up these days I mean look what they watch" Sam smiled and grabed a new shirt "By the way you hair looks good when its wet" Ruby put in. "Uh thanks" Sam said akwardly
"Well "she said "you ready?" "Yeah lets get to Bobbys"
Sam and Ruby pulled up to Bobbys house
"Is he even here?" Ruby asked
"yeah his trucks here so I assumed-"
"Uh-uh Sam you know what happens when you assume" Ruby said "Lets just see if hes home okay?" Sam said. They walked up to the door and Sam tried to open it. "locked" He said "then why don't you try knocking" Ruby said Sam knocked on the door. Bobby opened it and pointed a gun to Rubys face "Bobby calm down she's with me"Sam said he took Rubys hand and lead her in. "Bobby wheres Dean?" Sam asked "I burried him outside" Bobby answered "you did what?" Sam said "He probly started to smell Sam" Ruby said Sam began to walk outback "Where you goin?" Bobby asked "To unbury my brother" Bobby started to follow him when Ruby Stoped him "I'll get this just get some ice" She said
"Why?" he asked "you'll see" Ruby said as she walked outside
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sackles89 23. RE: A Demon's Kiss
May 26 2008, 4:06 PM EDT | Post edited: May 26 2008, 4:06 PM EDT
oooo what is she gonna do with the ice?
cnt w8 to find out.
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DontCallMeSammy 24. RE: A Demon's Kiss
May 26 2008, 6:38 PM EDT | Post edited: May 26 2008, 6:38 PM EDT
Write more!!! AAAGGHH!! gggooodddd!!!!
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Kirstiegirl 25. RE: A Demon's Kiss
May 27 2008, 4:53 PM EDT | Post edited: May 27 2008, 4:53 PM EDT
Sorry
I'l update tomorow haveing writers block
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Kirstiegirl 26. RE: A Demon's Kiss
May 28 2008, 3:40 PM EDT | Post edited: May 28 2008, 3:40 PM EDT
"Sam.....you have to calm down the last thing you want is to see you brother dead I'll handle everythimg I promise." Ruby said her voice solom. "Your handleing this? Ruby you keep saying that but you never do anything b/c you wont do anything now I'll do something" Sam said angerily "What are you going to do Sam have a Dead body in the car its gonna smell" She said her face was geting red with anger. "Don't talk about my brother like that" Sam said moveing closer to her. "Its time to grow up Sam you are going to be leading an army you have to stop depending on Dean." She yelled. "You know what its like being in Hell he's suffering" sam said clenching his fists. "News flash Sam thats why its called hell." Ruby yelled back Sam's face became dark "what are you going to do Sam hit me" she asked him "No Ruby I'm not going to hit you. I don't hit girls" Sam said his voice growing calmer. "Well you brother did" She said folding her arms. "Well you did call him a dick so..." Sam started "Yeah Yeah I desvered it" she finished Sam smiled and grabed her arm to pull her closer just before he was about to kiss her bobby came back "uh just got the ice" Bobby said "damn it bobby" Sam yelled Ruby grabed to 4 bags of ice "were going to presever Deans body. Bobby every day I want you to replace it with more" she said "and were are you 2 going" he asked "Home or whats left of it" Sam said "why you goin there" Bobby asked "Still trying to figure that out" Ruby said "what do you mean by that?" Sam asked "well it would be esayier if I still had my spell book" Ruby said "and were is that" sam asked "a musem...in london"
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DontCallMeSammy 27. RE: A Demon's Kiss
May 28 2008, 3:59 PM EDT | Post edited: May 28 2008, 3:59 PM EDT
interesting... i dont like SAM trying to kiss ruby, if it was the other way around i would be better..... its still good though!!
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Kirstiegirl 28. RE: A Demon's Kiss
May 29 2008, 3:33 PM EDT | Post edited: May 29 2008, 3:33 PM EDT
That does make sense.I like that idea.
"LONDON" Sam yelled "how the hell are we going to get to london"
"Sam CHILL I'll figure it out ok......Is that britsh girl still around" She asked "Bela? She died Lilith had her soul" Sam said "Well there goes my plan" Ruby said "What do you mean you can't save dean?" Sam asked growing Sad "I can still save him but maybe we can go to Salem I bet I could find something there." Ruby stated "Ruby this Little adventure is costing us alot of time and money" Sam said "Patience Sammy never hurt anybody" she said.The 2 started out the door " Where are you guys going now" Bobby yelled "Salem" The 2 said "This is why I never had kids always moving around" Bobbu muttered "Bobby keep ice around dean at all times. Got it?" ruby said "yeah yeah" He said. Ruby got in the car and beeped the horn "come on Sam we don't have forever" She yelled "Sam" Bobby said pulling Sam aside " I don't trust her you should've killed her" bobby whisped "Well I do" Sam said. He walked over to the car and got in. "you know" Ruby said "You brother's music is kinda ironic" "What do you mean" Sam asked "Highway to Hell." She said picking up the tape. "oh that" Sam said a smile appearing "Yeah Sam that" Ruby said "Hey Ruby what were you like when you were alive" Sam asked Ruby looked up at him memerios filling her head. She smiled and Said "do you really wanna know Sam"
"Yes"
"Fine then I'll tell you" Tell me what you think I'm planing to hook Sam/Ruby in the next 3 chapters
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May 29 2008, 4:16 PM EDT | Post edited: May 29 2008, 4:16 PM EDT
interesting but the way u write ruby she has lost her flare the reason i like her in the show was because she was pompous and funny and mean at the same time sort like u know bad girl act u should have them fighting or something even lovebirds fight and it would give her back her flare, and somehow if ruby did like sam i dont think she would take a while to develope this relationship i think shes all or nothing like it would happen in a span of one episode not 9 chapters slowly.i dont know make them have a pre relationship fight where she ends up insulting dean and they start throwing punches but then they end up kissing or something that would give ruby her flare back and take sam one step further towards dean! :0>
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May 29 2008, 4:18 PM EDT | Post edited: May 29 2008, 4:18 PM EDT
but keep writing i enjoy reading ur story, and let me know if u dont like my oppinions sorry if they affend u
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sackles89 31. RE: A Demon's Kiss
May 29 2008, 5:47 PM EDT | Post edited: May 29 2008, 5:47 PM EDT
hey shadowsmist, i like that idea, bt like u sed keep writing.
god i love this story keep it up kristiegirl
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Kirstiegirl 32. RE: A Demon's Kiss
May 30 2008, 1:22 PM EDT | Post edited: May 30 2008, 1:22 PM EDT
Yeah I like you opponoins it gives me more Ideas but Ruby will have her flare. comeing I''m gonna update later today but yeah I welcome everyones thoughts
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Kirstiegirl 33. RE: A Demon's Kiss
May 30 2008, 5:17 PM EDT | Post edited: May 30 2008, 5:17 PM EDT
"Well" Ruby began "I was like every other women during the plague. Between trying to keep myself alive and my family I became very stressed out. One morning I was tending to my younger sister when a girl came in she was 8 or 9. She came over to me and said there was a way I could save my family. I said I would do anything. Her eyes turned red and she told me that all I had to do is give them this liqiud she gave me the spell and told me about a cult I could join all I had to do was give her something in return. My family Survied long enough to watch me be burned at stake next thing I know I'm in hell." Ruby finished her story with a hint of sorrow in her eyes."So what happened to your family" Sam asked "Hellhounds took my 2 sisters and my father died of the plauge. My mom died during child birth when she had my sister. So In a way Sam we are alike." Ruby said "I went though hell and back to save them"
"But you ended up being screwed in Lilith's deal" Sam said
"Yup" Ruby said "Well at least I know something about you now" Sam said with a laugh. He stoped at the motel and got thier room. "Ruby I want to start my training" Sam demaned "not now" Ruby answered with an attuide. "Why not we have been putting this off for weeks Ruby" Sam said his voice riseing. "Stop Rushing this Sam your not ready" She said "Is that all you can say Ruby"
"I know I do you guys where never Ready to fight Lilith but you did anyway just once sam get you ego out of your small brain and listen to me"
"Listen to you every time I listen to you something bad happens"
"I could've Saved Dean but his Male Ego got the best of him and you had to watch you brother get torn to pieces"
"Why are you like this Ruby?"
"Because Sam I dont want to see you get hurt"
"Why give me 1good reason
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sackles89 34. RE: A Demon's Kiss
May 31 2008, 9:59 PM EDT | Post edited: May 31 2008, 9:59 PM EDT
ooooooh cnt w8.
i just got back from my friends house at nearly 3 in the morning. im abit drunk but rly tired and that passage was jst what the doctor ordered : )
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DontCallMeSammy 35. RE: A Demon's Kiss
Jun 1 2008, 1:15 PM EDT | Post edited: Jun 1 2008, 1:15 PM EDT
KEEP GOIN'!!
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Kirstiegirl 36. RE: A Demon's Kiss
Jun 3 2008, 3:49 PM EDT | Post edited: Jun 3 2008, 3:49 PM EDT
"You want me to give you one good reason fine then I don't want to see you die Sam your public enemy number one Some Demons hate you and others will follow you" Ruby said
"What is this a joke I'm not teaming up with demons ruby and how do I know that everything that were doing is not a lie" Sam said "Cause it's not I've never lied to you Sam and this obbsesin with your brother is killing you sam I'm worried" Said Ruby as she put her hand on his shoulder " Why are you worried about me and stop giveing me crap about this training thing cause I-" he was cut off by the force of Ruby's lips on his. His lips felt like fire agianst hers. He knew right then and there what lilith said was true and he knew that it was ruby who was kissing him.they broke apart to come up for air "What was that" Sam said as he lowerd his forhead to hers. "something that I've been keeping for a long time." Ruby said breathlsy Sam chuckled and the 2 remained standing with their arms wraped around each other Quote & reply Post reply Delete this reply out of found this valuable. Do you find this valuable?
MissSPN 37. RE: A Demon's Kiss
Jun 3 2008, 4:31 PM EDT | Post edited: Jun 3 2008, 4:31 PM EDT
I LOVED IT!!!
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DontCallMeSammy 38. RE: A Demon's Kiss
Jun 3 2008, 6:04 PM EDT | Post edited: Jun 3 2008, 6:04 PM EDT
umm ok get through the kissy scean!! (i hate that stuff if theres alot of it) LOL its good
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sackles89 39. RE: A Demon's Kiss
Jun 3 2008, 10:30 PM EDT | Post edited: Jun 3 2008, 10:30 PM EDT
awww i love it.
i was skim reading at first and thought that it said it was lilith kissing sam lol.
i think they both need some sexual healing lool ; )
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DontCallMeSammy 40. RE: A Demon's Kiss
Jun 4 2008, 3:12 PM EDT | Post edited: Jun 4 2008, 3:12 PM EDT
"awww i love it.
i was skim reading at first and thought that it said it was lilith kissing sam lol.
i think they both need some sexual healing lool ; )"NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!! EWWWWW!! *runz away*
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Kirstiegirl 41. RE: A Demon's Kiss
Jun 4 2008, 6:59 PM EDT | Post edited: Jun 4 2008, 6:59 PM EDT
no don't worry I'm keeping it a little clean
*Sams vision*
Dean was suffering in hell "SAM!" he yellled tears streaming from his eyes. "Please Sammy help me oh God please" Sam shot up from sleep and looked at Ruby who was sleeping next to him. " Ruby" he said shakeing her slightly. "get up we have to go" Sam got up out of bed and started to pack their things. Ruby sat up a little rubbing her weary eyes she looked at her phone "Sam do you relize what time it is oh my god you finally lost it" she said her voice horse. "Ruby I had a vision" He said not looking her in the eye. "Really so they are comeing back just like I said" She said "Yeah but this ones about Dean. he is suffering ruby. We are leaveing now." he demaned "Fine" she said as she got up and kissed him lightly "lemme get changed."
Sam sat back on the bed "wait, did you just aggree with me" sam asked "yeah why" Ruby said "because you yell I yell we start to aruge and you end up wining"
"Well yeah thats the way but I'm tried so you ready" she asked
"yeah" he said ruby and him left the motel and got into the car
"how far is salem?" she asked
from here it 25 miles" he said
"Well then sammy put the pedal to the metal."
"That is probly the dumbest thing you ever said"
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sackles89 42. RE: A Demon's Kiss
Jun 4 2008, 8:41 PM EDT | Post edited: Jun 4 2008, 8:41 PM EDT
lol i loved it. it was serious and i loved the little joke at the end.
i might make it a quote of mine "put the pedal to the metal".
lool
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MissSPN 43. RE: A Demon's Kiss
Jun 5 2008, 11:25 AM EDT | Post edited: Jun 5 2008, 11:25 AM EDT
OMG This was so cool, i love it, i think you done this well, :-)
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DontCallMeSammy 44. RE: A Demon's Kiss
Jun 5 2008, 3:20 PM EDT | Post edited: Jun 5 2008, 3:20 PM EDT
GO GO GO!
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Kirstiegirl 45. RE: A Demon's Kiss
Jun 6 2008, 3:42 PM EDT | Post edited: Jun 6 2008, 3:42 PM EDT
Sam and Ruby pulled up to a little house on the side of the road "Ruby? does the person who lives here know where coming?" Sam asked her "No" She said "but what this lady doesn't knows wont hurt her."
"Wait so your breaking into some lady's house" Sam asked
"No Sam I'm fixing her door nob.Plus she's like a 150 years old and this ***** has my cults spell book and I want it back" she said fumbleing with the lock. "Hah got it" She said proudly and pushed open the door.
The both walked in and an terrible smell hit them both. "Christ what is that smell" Sam said puting his hand over his nose. Ruby walked into the kitchen "That is the smell of witch craft" Ruby replid
"No the right word is vodoo" Said a women coming around the corner "Ruby hello to you how long has it been 100 years mabye more"
"Another one of your friends ruby" Sam asked her
"Isabel so hows life" Ruby asked
"Life has been great ruby how about you following the anti chist becomeing his girlfriend do you relize how many demons you have pissed off." she said
"Look I'm just here to get the spell book back if you wanna make a fight over it then fine" Ruby said
"hey lets not" Sam said
Ruby and Isabel started to walk around each other.
"Ruby lets leave their has to another way." Sam asked her
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DontCallMeSammy 46. RE: A Demon's Kiss
Jun 6 2008, 4:52 PM EDT | Post edited: Jun 6 2008, 4:52 PM EDT
WHAT-OH!!! GREAT JOB!!!
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DontCallMeSammy 47. RE: A Demon's Kiss
Jun 6 2008, 4:53 PM EDT | Post edited: Jun 6 2008, 4:53 PM EDT
Im making a fan fic and you can read a bit of teh begining and tell me what you think! KAY? its in fan fiction ( a thread right now)
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sackles89 48. RE: A Demon's Kiss
Jun 7 2008, 8:56 AM EDT | Post edited: Jun 7 2008, 8:56 AM EDT
wow i cnt wait for the fight sequence, and i wonder why she wants revenge.
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DontCallMeSammy 49. RE: A Demon's Kiss
Jun 7 2008, 2:46 PM EDT | Post edited: Jun 7 2008, 2:46 PM EDT
REVENGE!!! HAHAHHAA!!! !
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Kirstiegirl 50. RE: A Demon's Kiss
Jun 12 2008, 2:52 PM EDT | Post edited: Jun 12 2008, 2:52 PM EDT
Ruby attacked Isabel in blind site and crashed her into the china closet. Shards of glass and pieces of wood went flying
"Ruby! listen stop just get the book and leave" Sam yelled
with her free hand Isabel used her powers to choke Sam. Ruby looked over at Samto see him 3 feet in the air gasping for air she put her hand to Isabel's neck and choked her "Leave him out of this." Ruby hissed her eyes going black "Why?" Isabel choked out you don't want the pain of loseing someone like Sam again. Really hun it took you hundereds of years to get over the 1st guy." Isabel looked over at Sam "did I mention that you 2 look very alike. I'm the one responsible for his death" she let go of sam who got up and rushed over to Ruby. He handed he the knife which ruby then thrust into Isabels chest. Ruby got up and broke down Sam grabed her and held her close. "Sam" she said in a small voice "the book is behind the closet"
"Its okay we can wait a secound or 2" he said in her ear. *Sorry this took so long I hand and infected gum and I had to go get work done but I Have enough pain killers in me for a life time so Im a little out of it
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DontCallMeSammy 51. RE: A Demon's Kiss
Jun 12 2008, 4:53 PM EDT | Post edited: Jun 12 2008, 4:53 PM EDT
YAY! i thought u died i was going to go 2 ur house and find u and demand that u write more jk lol
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MissSPN 52. RE: A Demon's Kiss
Jun 12 2008, 5:12 PM EDT | Post edited: Jun 12 2008, 5:12 PM EDT
this was cool, good job
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Kirstiegirl 53. RE: A Demon's Kiss
Jun 16 2008, 1:41 PM EDT | Post edited: Jun 16 2008, 1:41 PM EDT
Ruby walked over to the shatered china closet and Sam helped her move it. Behind it was ply wood covering a hole in the wall. Sam covered his hand with his jacket and punched into the wall. Ruby pulled the rest of the wood away and reached in and pulled out the book.
Sam took a good look at the book. "So this will bring Dean back" He asked
"Yeah that and some pigs blood been to any proms lately?" Ruby said smileing "Funny....This is in latin." Sam said. "of corse it is what do you expect it to be in" Ruby said. Sam began to read it "...blood of an angel? how the hell are we goin to get that?" Sam asked
"Don't forget blood of a half demon" Ruby put in. "A half-- This is impossible"
Sam said "Nothing is impossible Sam" Ruby said slyly "What ever happen to eye of newt and tonge of frog" Sam asked as they walked out of the house. Before Sam shut the door Isabel's body rose. She began to speak her voice demonic."on that day the sky will cry blood, the earth will burn and mankind will no longer egsist"
Sam turned to Ruby who said "thats what were preventing" she said her voice solom. Isabel's body began to burn then dissaper. both began to walk to the car but saw a young blond leaning on it. "Hey Sam whats up" she said. Sam smiled sheeplishly "hey Jo."
"So wheres Dean" Jo said smileing
"You don't know"Ruby asked
"Don't know what" Jo said glareing at ruby. "Who is any way" Jo asked
"Jo this is Ruby my girlfried" Sam said
"I think we better say something to your friend sam" Ruby said
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DontCallMeSammy 54. RE: A Demon's Kiss
Jun 16 2008, 4:48 PM EDT | Post edited: Jun 16 2008, 4:48 PM EDT
WAHHH! (girlfriend?!!)
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MissSPN 55. RE: A Demon's Kiss
Jun 17 2008, 5:24 PM EDT | Post edited: Jun 17 2008, 5:24 PM EDT
OMG that was cool and girlfriend???? mmmmm, i like it
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Kirstiegirl 56. RE: A Demon's Kiss
Jun 17 2008, 10:04 PM EDT | Post edited: Jun 17 2008, 10:04 PM EDT
They took Jo to a diner and told her everything. "So he's Dead?" Jo asked dumbfounded. "Yup dead as a door nail but don't worry I have a plan" Ruby said
"You actully trust this Demon Sam?" Jo asked
"What is with people you know and not likeing me" Ruby asked shakeing her head
"Yeah I trust her" Sam told Jo
Ruby took out the book and it landed on the table with a loud thud. People eating their meals looked up
"Hey come on nothing to see here" Ruby said loudly. Sam put his hand to hand to his head prepareing for the on comeing headache. "God damn old people and always haveing to know what going on" Ruby muttered
"A half Demons blood how are you going to get that?" Jo asked ruby
"Easy! see that waitress over there Dad was a demon mom was a hunter" Ruby said. Sam truned his head to see her. She looked like a normal teenage girl auburn hair and brown eyes wearing a white tee and faded blue jeans.
"One thing about her is that you should never piss her off." Ruby said smirking
"Why?" Jo asked
"Cause she'll kill you from the inside out." Ruby answered
"oh" Sam and Jo said at the same time.
The girl walked over to them "What can I get you" she asked "just pie" Sam said he looked at her name tag "Carly nice name" Sam said Carly gave sam a look and turned to Ruby. "I'll have fries" Ruby looked up and her eyes went black. Carly's Body tensed. "My shift ends at 4 talk to me then." She Said
"Easy as pie" Ruby said. Jo glared at her
"I'll still don't like you" Jo said
"Feelings mutal" Ruby said returning Jo's Death stare *I know I made Jo a little bitchy but Ruby and her will get along. Reviews always make me happy
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DontCallMeSammy 57. RE: A Demon's Kiss
Jun 18 2008, 10:36 AM EDT | Post edited: Jun 18 2008, 10:36 AM EDT
good.. but coudn't they get the half demons blood from sam? > Last Edit my postCancel shadowsmist 60. RE: A Demon's Kiss
Jun 18 2008, 1:48 PM EDT | Post edited: Jun 18 2008, 1:48 PM EDT
nice it keeps getting better and better , lol see i couldnt do what u do i can write but i couldnt come up with samll details like u are my writing is more like battle sequenses i wouldnt have been able to do this because i have little patience,i would have skipped the little stuff and just gone to the beef of the matter,but ur doing a good job i, dont write as often as u i only write when i feel like it and that is like a week apart.
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Kirstiegirl 61. RE: A Demon's Kiss
Jun 18 2008, 7:46 PM EDT | Post edited: Jun 18 2008, 7:46 PM EDT
After the diner was cleared out Sam,Ruby, and Jo went up to the counter to talk to Carly. "So uh what do you guys want. Cause you know I've been trying my hardest to live a normal life ignore my powers and now you guys come out of know where and want my help." She said in one breath "Hey carly I'm leaveing you closeing up?" Said a man with grease stains on his shirt. "Yeah I will just lemme finish up here." Carly said with a small smile. "Allrighty then seeya" He said
"Look mabye you should take a deep breath and-" Sam Started
"Look you have no idea what I've been through" She said
"I think I have an Idea" Sam said
"No you don't my dad went back to hell my mom sent him there. Then after she had me she left me on the offering table in a church. And to put the incing on the cake every demon and hunter wants me dead" Carly said
"Wow" Ruby and Jo said "What" Carly asked them. "No its just your story is very hunchback of noterdameish." Ruby said Jo noding in agreement. Carly shot them a glare "Its a good thing" Jo said
Sam sighed "Look we don't want to kill you we just want your blood" Sam said smileing
Carly's eyes widen in horror
"what he means is we just need a vile to bring back his dead brother." Ruby said
"You mean Dean?" Carly asked
"Yeah how did you know?" Jo asked
"Because everyone was talking about it" Carly said
"So you'll help us" Sam asked hopefully
"Yeah I guess. But I know where to find an angel"
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DontCallMeSammy 62. RE: A Demon's Kiss
Jun 19 2008, 10:52 AM EDT | Post edited: Jun 19 2008, 10:52 AM EDT
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MissSPN 63. RE: A Demon's Kiss
Jun 19 2008, 11:16 AM EDT | Post edited: Jun 19 2008, 11:16 AM EDT
its always soooo cool, each time i read a new one it just gets better and better, GOOD !!!
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sackles89 64. RE: A Demon's Kiss
Jun 19 2008, 8:03 PM EDT | Post edited: Jun 19 2008, 8:03 PM EDT
"its always soooo cool, each time i read a new one it just gets better and better, GOOD !!!"i totally agree : )
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Kirstiegirl 65. RE: A Demon's Kiss
Jun 20 2008, 2:03 PM EDT | Post edited: Jun 20 2008, 2:03 PM EDT
Thanks for the reviews heres the next part.
"How do you know an angel" Jo asked her. "I mean how can you tell an angel from a human?"
"Auras" Carly stated Simpliy. "What?" Sam asked
"Every one has a differnet color around them. Like I could tell Ruby was a demon she has a black Halo around her head. Jo you have a grey one. Hunters are always grey. Sam yours is very difficult to read It's black with white and red vains in it. Never seen it before. Angels Have gold around their head."
"A symbol for pureity" Jo said
"Oh so there is a brian in that head of yours who knew" Ruby said smiling "You know when its not filled with thoughts of Dean" Ruby said slyly.
Jo slamed her fists on the counter. "Sam you better get her to shut up or I swear to God that I will kill her."
"Ruby could you lay off the insults for a while." Sam asked her
"Well then tell her not to be so defenseive. Does bad things to a girls skin."Carly interuped their fight. "So why rescue your brother. How will that help anything." She asked Sam. "He can help kill Lilith" he said "Lilith? Mother of all demons you think you can kill her."
"Shes weak now after sam gave her a run for her money" Ruby said puting a hand on Sam's shoulder. Carly looked at the two of them and Raised her eyebrows "Oh I see whats going on you love him don't you." Ruby became silent Sam choked on his drink. and Jo said "Sam your brother is not gonna be a happy boy when he comes back"
"Wait you two already hooked up" Carly said again "Yep Deans gonna be pissed" Jo said
"Thats none of your- Wait how do you know that" Sam asked
"She dug into your mind,looked into your past." Ruby said. "Dont worry youll figureout how to do it" Carly said "Stay at my place tonight
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DontCallMeSammy 66. RE: A Demon's Kiss
Jun 21 2008, 10:52 AM EDT | Post edited: Jun 21 2008, 10:52 AM EDT
OMG OMG OMG! SOOO GOOD!
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MissSPN 67. RE: A Demon's Kiss
Jun 21 2008, 1:04 PM EDT | Post edited: Jun 21 2008, 1:04 PM EDT
OMG WOW that was soooo cool !!!!
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sackles89 68. RE: A Demon's Kiss
Jun 21 2008, 3:05 PM EDT | Post edited: Jun 21 2008, 3:05 PM EDT
gr8. i hope they train sam up to use his abilities like carly.
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Kirstiegirl 69. RE: A Demon's Kiss
Jun 21 2008, 8:25 PM EDT | Post edited: Jun 21 2008, 8:25 PM EDT
"How in the hell did you afford a place like this on waitress slarey?" Jo asked Carley as she looked up at the house
"That, You'll never know" She said with a smile as she opened the door. Carly threw herslef on the sofa with a loud sigh. She was later joined by Ruby and Jo who was siting on differnet sides on the sofa as asked by Sam. "So what happened to Sam's powers? Cause he is soposed to be way more powerful then me." Carly asked Ruby
"He lost them after yellow eyes died. but they came back after Lilith killed Dean. They come and go Because about 2 weeks ago Sam had a Vision of Dean in hell." Ruby Said
Jo spoke up "Was Dean in pain" she asked sadly
Ruby nooded her head "Sam said that he was suffering. Thats why we have to work faster to bring him back. Theres a chance he wont be the same Dean that you knew." Ruby said sadly
"That angel , How about me and carly go looking for him tommorw." Jo asked Ruby
"That would be great Ruby you can focas on a way to bring Sam's powers back but do me a favor do it in a field or something." Carly asked ruby
"Why would you wanna do that?" Jo asked
"Because Sams a ticking time bomb once his powers come back who knows what could happen" Ruby Said
"Hey" Sam said comeing out of the rooms "you guys are geting along?"
"in a way" Ruby said getting up and kissing him lightly.
"Ew god they olny be together for two weeks and their all lovey dovey" Jo whispered "You just wish that was you and Dean" Carly said trying her hardest not to laugh "I do not have a thing for dean" Jo grolwed. They watched sam and Ruby go off to their Room "Hey no funny Bussinus, I want a good nights sleep." Carly yelled at the 2 "I agree 100% with her" Jo yelled "tommorow is a big day" Jo said
"your damn right"
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sackles89 70. RE: A Demon's Kiss
Jun 21 2008, 10:05 PM EDT | Post edited: Jun 21 2008, 10:05 PM EDT
tut tut naughty sammy ans ruby lol
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MissSPN 71. RE: A Demon's Kiss
Jun 22 2008, 11:19 AM EDT | Post edited: Jun 22 2008, 11:19 AM EDT
omg that was great and it was funny it was soo interesting, good job :)
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DontCallMeSammy 72. RE: A Demon's Kiss
Jun 22 2008, 12:22 PM EDT | Post edited: Jun 22 2008, 12:22 PM EDT
goooooooooooooooooooood! *eww kissie* but it was goooooooooooooooooooooD!
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Kirstiegirl 73. RE: A Demon's Kiss
Jun 22 2008, 6:37 PM EDT | Post edited: Jun 22 2008, 6:37 PM EDT
fJo and Carly where the first to get up "So how are we going to get this guy to come with us" Jo asked her "Easy" Carly said smiling. She opened up one of the closets to show a huge dissplay of guns, knives, Brass knuckles blessed by preists, and many other means of protection. "Were gonna shot him! Ruby said he has to be alive" Jo said "I know what ruby said. These are tranquilizers. they will just or a few hours." She said as she filled the gun with little darts.
"Oh, well what do you want me to do"Jo asked. Carly threw her a gun like hers "You can help." Jo looked down at the gun "How do you affored all this stuff?" Jo aksed her "Pickpocketing" Carly said simpily "Pick- you steal" Jo whispered. Carly threw her a look and opened her mouth to say something when Ruby came out and said "No shes a begger. yes she steals its called demon nature" Ruby looked down at carly "good job" Carly smiled and continued loading the gun "Who steals" Sam said yawning. "Wow" Carly and Jo said looking at sams hair which was sticking up. "What" he asked them "Nothing" Jo said "You look like a lunatic" Carly said. An hour later carly and Jo left to find the angel. "So what we doin today" Sam asked Ruby "Training" Ruby said "Damn" sam said sadly
Jo and Carly entered the libary "well he should be here." Carly said. "Thats what you said about the starbucks, the church, and the arcade how old is he anyway." Jo said "19 in human years 192 in angel years. Hah got em." Carly said. Jo flowed Carly and they Stoped at a huge row of book cases. "he's in one of these asiles" Carly said. Jo scowled at her "which one" Jo asked her "third row" she said. Jo came up around the row and talked to him Carly came up and shot him. "got em"
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sackles89 74. RE: A Demon's Kiss
Jun 23 2008, 8:42 AM EDT | Post edited: Jun 23 2008, 8:42 AM EDT
cool, cnt w8 for more.
it was a bit easy getting the angel but i suppose he is only like 19 and his attention was taken by jo.
love the story so far, cnt w8 for more. : )
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DontCallMeSammy 75. RE: A Demon's Kiss
Jun 23 2008, 10:02 AM EDT | Post edited: Jun 23 2008, 10:02 AM EDT
OHHH! cooooolllll! great job! love it!
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Kirstiegirl 76. RE: A Demon's Kiss
Jun 23 2008, 3:48 PM EDT | Post edited: Jun 23 2008, 3:48 PM EDT
"Why didn't he put up a fight" Jo asked looking down at the boy. "Well look at him even if he tried he would still be in the same state" Carly said. "Not much of a warrior" jo said "Shh some one comeing" Carly said Jo ran over to the table and grabed the cloth. The liberian walked up to the girls "What is goining on hear and whats that." she asked "Umm a dog" Jo started "Big dog fomeing at the mouth we just took care of him. So uhh we will be leaveing" Carly said ushering to jo to help her pick him up. "Bye" they both said leaveing the libraian very confused. When they got outside carly threw him into the back of Jos pick up and he landed with a bang. "Could you be any more gentle" Jo said sarcastily. "Nope. Now to find Sam and Ruby" Carly said proudly.
*Meanwhile*
Sam and Ruby were training at and old farm house. "Now we know what makes you tick" Ruby said "I want you to think of Dean Sam. Right now at this very moment he's Suffering dieing all over again. All because he was to proud to accpet any ones help." Ruby said smileing "Shut up" Sam said "Hey but at least he has company. Jess....Your father. Their all stubbron not wanting you help. Never listening to you. Pretty Stupid. Your always in the back sam.Never a leader." Ruby finished
"I said Shut up" Sam said gritting his teeth. A rough wind started to circle around Sam. Carly and Jo found the barn and started inside. Ruby began to back up knowing what was about to happen next. Carly ran in with Jo following her. "Get back" Carly yelled. She put her right hand in front of her and a black barrier surrounded them. When every thing calmed down she realsed them from the barrier. They all saw Sam black whisps began to fade away. "Sam" Ruby asked. He looked up his eyes changed back. "How do you feel" she asked "good
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DontCallMeSammy 77. RE: A Demon's Kiss
Jun 23 2008, 4:50 PM EDT | Post edited: Jun 23 2008, 4:50 PM EDT
what he do???? >
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MissSPN 80. RE: A Demon's Kiss
Jun 25 2008, 2:57 PM EDT | Post edited: Jun 25 2008, 2:57 PM EDT
wow i loved that !!!!!!!!!!!!
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DontCallMeSammy 81. RE: A Demon's Kiss
Jun 25 2008, 3:59 PM EDT | Post edited: Jun 25 2008, 3:59 PM EDT
jo is weirdly funny..>< lol
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sackles89 82. RE: A Demon's Kiss
Jun 25 2008, 4:48 PM EDT | Post edited: Jun 25 2008, 4:48 PM EDT
that was wicked. funny, serious, and a gr8 end for now : )
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Kirstiegirl 83. RE: A Demon's Kiss
Jun 26 2008, 2:45 PM EDT | Post edited: Jun 26 2008, 2:45 PM EDT
They stoped for gas. Sam Listened to Jo and Carley argue about who was going to pay for it. Carly finilay gave in muttered something about Jo and payed. Sam got back into the car and looked over at Ruby. "You ready for this" She asked him puting her hand on his arm for comfort. There was a long drawn out beat "Yeah I think I am. I just wanna hear his wise cracks again" Sam said "Well I think we have enough of that" Ruby said looking over at Jo and Carly. "Yeah...Who is her dad" Sam asked. "Sam all of that will be answered in time" Ruby said. Jo was looking for a something to listen to when a huge thud came from the bed of the truck. "Sonofa-" Jo began "Thats it"Carly said rolling down her window and climbing out of the car window. Ruby watching the sit from the rear view mirror said "What the Hell is she doing"
"Here call Jo" Sam said handing her his phone. hearing her phone ring jo pick it up. "He wont stop kicking and yelling" Jo yelled. by know carly was in the bed of the truck. "You filthy demonic half breed" the angel screamed "well you hit the nail on the head" Carly said he began yelling again. This time Carly covered his mouth with her hand. "now are you gonna shut up or do you want me to get the needle out." she said he began to calm down "thought so now can you tell me your name." Calry said.
"Matthew" he muttered "well then Matt we have a job for you." They arrived at bobby's 20 hrs later Opening the door Jo was ambushed by her mom. "Can't breath" Jo said "Sorry hun Sam" Ellen said "how are you doin" she said "who are you" she asked Ruby "Oh I'm Ruby"
"You know it would be great if someone could help me he's stil a little out of it" carly said holding matt's arm. Ellen looked over at carly and "MyGod'
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DontCallMeSammy 84. RE: A Demon's Kiss
Jun 26 2008, 3:06 PM EDT | Post edited: Jun 26 2008, 3:06 PM EDT
ohh! it sounds like ellen knows carly! (thats what it sounds like to me!)
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jackles 85. RE: A Demon's Kiss
Jun 26 2008, 4:30 PM EDT | Post edited: Jun 26 2008, 4:30 PM EDT
it's getting interesting!
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MissSPN 86. RE: A Demon's Kiss
Jun 27 2008, 2:02 PM EDT | Post edited: Jun 27 2008, 2:02 PM EDT
thats was soo interesting!!! cant wait!!! :-)
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Kirstiegirl 87. RE: A Demon's Kiss
Jun 27 2008, 6:58 PM EDT | Post edited: Jun 27 2008, 6:58 PM EDT
My god" Ellen gasped. "Dear Lord" Bobby said. "Mom,you know her?" Jo asked "Yeah well at least her Mom she is the splitting image of her mother Krista. She came to the road house, cold and damp from the rain, said she needed my help that she was 3 months pregnant. I asked her who the father was and she said a Demon named Daminan. I was angry at her you see Krista was a friend . God she was 16. I let her stay. 6 mon later she went into labor and gave birth to a Little girl who she named Carly. Krista looked uncomfortable so I told her I would raise you as my own. She said no she could handle it and left a day later. Jo how come you don't remember this" Ellen said "I donno I remember Krista though bitchy little-" Jo said "Hey don't talk about her like that. so were is your mom." Ellen asked Carly. "don't know never met her she abandon me when I was 1 week old. That’s what the nuns told me" Carly said "oh god I’m so sorry" Ellen said hugging her "your with family now". Sam spoke up "umm uh dead brother to bring back" Sam and Bobby went to the celler to get Dean's body. While Carly got a glass of Ice water and splashed it on Matt's face. "My head" he groaned "that would be from carly droping you twice." Jo said Once they where outside Jo and carly began filling the tub dean is in with differnt smelling oils and herbs. Ruby drew a strange symbol in the dirt and started to light candles. A wooden bowl sat infront of her and she began to mix strange powders and liquids together. She finaly called everyone over and told them to sit in a circle "you guys ready for this" She asked them. everyone noded "Okay then lets bring the Short bus back"
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DontCallMeSammy 88. RE: A Demon's Kiss
Jun 27 2008, 7:13 PM EDT | Post edited: Jun 27 2008, 7:13 PM EDT
lol short bus!
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