Author: INK.
Subject: CFC Prelim: The Butcher vs Zinaii
Posted: 03 January 2014 at 11:36pm
The Butcher
you breathin heavy gaspin like an asthmatic
failed out last tourny, musta been traumatic
ur just stating ur concept you need to flip it into a punchline, a personal no doubt but no impact...
punches im a crack shot, you ima crack ya jaw
limpin, like you fucked by the long dick of The Law
nah very bad to reuse the same starting word to multi with..shows lack of creativity. Ehh closest i seen to punching tbh
ruthless, so bow to me, i'm the hand of fate
in ruin like ya bars, make you delapidate
ur doing statments here there is no actual punchline i wish you guys would start calling guys out on this, so that they can see why they're not successful at capturing a win.
im runnin Z like a racer X rival
battlein me like be thrown to the wolvs ~ survival
nah u need to add more words here to make this into a punch u lack detail to make this do anything broham
ZINAII
U joined ash, who dropped that horrible song but u think shes a diva
Heard him on the remix of so cold, his verse is about meat in freezers
Alright this is decent. an actual punchine a personal as well
You'll reach the reaper, the rhymes you emit, give off a feces odor
Cuz ur shit is weak, u shuld "admit defeat" like ur post in kikis open
personal again could've set this up way better and worded in the same light tbh..u have improved. good shit.
This loss? Accept and humble, yaself from this rumble
ill drop butch like a change of heart with lesbian couples
punchline a bit expected nothing heavy, should've used ur set up better to enhance this punch tbh
Like im Lighting a joint, i put the flame to this herb
Ur like big bens rape charges, bringing shame to the burg
ehh a punch but more of a weak jab u lack detail to make this sting..this seems like a quick jotted idea that u didn't really expand on
v/zin better lands and the only to drop punchlines good attempt butcher hit me up if u need some help i don't mind helping bro.