2013-02-03

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It was a week before Valentines Day. A new kid named Jack was lonely. Everyone rubbing "Love" in his face. He didn't have friends or a girlfriend. I was nice and went up to him and said "Hi". I wanted to be his friend, he seemed like a sweet guy. After getting to know him he asked me something, "Will you be my valentine?" Thoughts swilred in my head, "I just met you", I should have said but I said "Yes". He hugged me and went to class. I regret saying "Yes". I never knew a simple word could change my life.

It was a week before Valentines Day. A new kid named Jack was lonely. Everyone rubbing "Love" in his face. He didn't have friends or a girlfriend. I was nice and went up to him and said "Hi". I wanted to be his friend, he seemed like a sweet guy. After getting to know him he asked me something, "Will you be my valentine?" Thoughts swilred in my head, "I just met you", I should have said but I said "Yes". He hugged me and went to class. I regret saying "Yes". I never knew a simple word could change my life.



After school he went to my house. I didn't invite him and I don't know how he got my address so, I just let him in. He asked me what I wanted.I said "I want your heart. I want...you." I smiled at him, I wanted to sound sweet. He just smiled at me and kissed me on the cheek. He had a different look on his face. Not a nice one, nor a loving one. But an Evil one. I didn't know what to say to him so we just sat there. The silence was broke. "Im Sorry Babe I have to go" He ran outside and waved goodbye. I didn"t want this.

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After school he showed up at my house. I didn't invite him and I don't know how he got my address so, I just let him in. He asked me what I wanted.I said "I want your heart. I want...you." I smiled at him, I wanted to sound sweet. He just smiled at me and kissed me on the cheek. He had a different look on his face. Not a nice one, nor a loving one. But an Evil one. I didn't know what to say to him so we just sat there. The silence was broke. "Im Sorry Babe I have to go" He ran outside and waved goodbye. I didn"t want this.



It was a day before Valentines Day. He was acting all, odd. Unlike himself. He used to be all  sweet and kind, now he's acting very weird and suspicious. I got to know him a little more, he wasnt such a psycho I thought. I was completly wrong. He walked passed me and gave me a smile. He was cute. He wanted me to fall for him, but I just couldn't. I didn't know what he would do tomorrow. I couldnt even think of it. Each time I thought a little of it, my head would hurt, my stomach would twist and my heart would race. The little voice in my head said, "Dont be scared," yet another one said, "You should be scared, you never know with that kid."

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It was a day before Valentines Day. He was acting all, odd. Unlike himself. He used to be all  sweet and kind, now he's acting very weird and suspicious. I got to know him a little more, he wasnt such a psycho I thought. I was completely wrong. He walked passed me and gave me a smile. He was cute. He wanted me to fall for him, but I just couldn't. I didn't know what he would do tomorrow. I couldnt even think of it. Each time I thought a little of it, my head would hurt, my stomach would twist and my heart would race. The little voice in my head said, "Dont be scared," yet another one said, "You should be scared, you never know with that kid."

That night I couldnt go to sleep. The voices in my head were fighting with me. "Hes going to give you something nice" "Oh No! He will probably scare you" "Dont listen to him!" They continued to fight. I remember i could have stopped them. But I couldnt. I sat there in my bed thinking. He was evil. He is going to give me something Evil. He might even kill me. I will have to wait and see.

That night I couldnt go to sleep. The voices in my head were fighting with me. "Hes going to give you something nice" "Oh No! He will probably scare you" "Dont listen to him!" They continued to fight. I remember i could have stopped them. But I couldnt. I sat there in my bed thinking. He was evil. He is going to give me something Evil. He might even kill me. I will have to wait and see.



It was Valentines Day. I was scared about what awaited me that day. I remember this day so clearly. Typing this makes me shiver, bringing up a past like this. Everyone at school had their valentine. They exchanged presents and hugs. They all looked happy. I felt lonely that day, Jack never came to see me. I recieved a text from him reading, "Come meet me at the Park,"  I decided to go. Biggest Mistake ever. When I arrived I saw him holding a box and his hoodie was red, not white. His face was covered in blood. His pants had little red spots everywhere. I didn't know what to do. When I saw him I froze in fear.

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It was Valentines Day. I was scared about what awaited me that day. I remember this day so clearly. Typing this made me shiver, bringing up a past like this was Terrible. Everyone at school had their valentine. They exchanged presents and hugs. They all looked happy. I felt lonely that day, Jack never came to see me. I received a text from him reading, "Come meet me at the Park,"  I decided to go. Biggest Mistake ever.

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When I arrived I saw him holding a box and his hoodie was red, not white. His face was covered in blood. His pants had little red spots everywhere. I didn't know what to do. When I saw him I froze in fear.

[[File:M5600244-Gloved_hands_holding_freshly_removed_human_heart-SPL.jpg|thumb|A heart for you.]]

[[File:M5600244-Gloved_hands_holding_freshly_removed_human_heart-SPL.jpg|thumb|A heart for you.]]



"Happy Valentines day!" He screamed, as if he were trying to surprise me. "Im sorry if the gift disappoints you." He said. He handed me the red box. What could be in here? Jewlery? I was completly wrong. Inside the box was a heart. A Human heart. The inside of the box was stained with blood. "Im sorry I cant give you my heart, but I gave you his!" He said Holding up a body. It was a boy. He looked like if he were only 7 years old.

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"Happy Valentines day!" He screamed, as if he were trying to surprise me. "Im sorry if the gift disappoints you." He said. He handed me the red box. What could be in here? Jewlery? I was completely wrong. Inside the box was a heart. A Human heart. The inside of the box was stained with blood. "Im sorry I cant give you my heart, but I gave you his!" He said Holding up a body. It was a boy. He looked like if he were only 7 years old.

I was shocked but I think I was mostly scared. "Do you like it?" He asked. I was frozen with fear, what do I say? I didn't want him to kill me and I couldnt say yes I wouldn't be able to live with myself. So I just said nothing. "DID YOU LIKE IT?" He yelled. "Y-Yes" I stuttered. "Thats great." He smirked. He put the heart in my hand making sure I squeezed it.

I was shocked but I think I was mostly scared. "Do you like it?" He asked. I was frozen with fear, what do I say? I didn't want him to kill me and I couldnt say yes I wouldn't be able to live with myself. So I just said nothing. "DID YOU LIKE IT?" He yelled. "Y-Yes" I stuttered. "Thats great." He smirked. He put the heart in my hand making sure I squeezed it.

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