I hope you aren't offended by a quick paint over but I am really bad at describing artistic changes with words
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First I really like this piece. I really admire your line art and control over thick and thin lines. It's really great. I think there are a few things you could add or move around to make an even stronger composition, but feel free to ignore any or all of them if this is not the direction you were going for.
First, try lowering the horizon line and moving your vanishing points outside the borders of your piece. It should give you more space and breathing room to fill the composition with interesting city things and also make your character feel more grounded in the piece. I added some foreground elements and some background elements to add variety and they can help make your composition stronger if they lead the eye back to your character in some way. The last thing you can try is using a lighter gray for your background lines to help bring your darker foreground elements forward but that's up to your style and preference.
Anyway great work and I really like your piece. It makes me wonder who she is and where this character is going and I love when art makes me want to know their story. =)